Wednesday, 10 February 2016

INTRODUCTION TO LITERATURE: Short story

Second assignment of Literature course is creative writing. From my point of view, effective writing can be produced if we write the story based of our experience or some events that we involved before. Imagination of the peak or climax of the story also need to be attractive because that is the main point of the whole story. For the best, we can included something that nobody ever think it will happen.


He and Bean

By : Joyce Wee Shu Xian

It was very early and the cock crows got a rise in that morning. I was standing in front of my bed, covered tightly by a colorful quilts which mended by grandma, Popo. Suddenly, I got a big, warm hug from my back and it almost made me felt dizzy hanging in the air. It was him, beloved grandpa or for a more dearly call, Ah Gong. Ah Gong’s daughter in law, Aunty Mandy was urging us to have our breakfast before begin the chores, mend the ship and the fish nets. Aunt Mandy served the coffee after finished all the preparation for my three cousins to school. Ah Gong came near to me and said ‘Good girl, I’ll take you to the river later’, I doubt if Aunt Mandy hear anything because she just replied the situation with a bright smile.

Ah Gong put me in front of the tricycle. As Popo’s shout starting to be heard, ‘Take care of your fish net!’, Ah Gong started to pedal the tricycle and leave the big, old house. That day was a windy day and the sun shone brightly. Ah Gong stopped by the river, gave me a stick of vanilla ice cream and a little bear, I named it Bean. ‘Ah Gong, why do you named me Joyce?’, he kept murmuring, I wondered. He began with a soft deep sigh, ‘It is because you bring me happiness, joy. You are my joy’. Just a short answer, just sat together, just looked at the flowing river but it was memorable. Great memory is not about the thing we do, but it is with who, we create the memory.

It was almost dawn. A loud fighting sound was heard when Aunt Mandy son’s, Kol, was snatching Bean from me. I started to cry and Ah Gong rushed in. Ah Gong asked Kol to return Bean to me but he refused. Ah Gong began to get angry and Kol got a scold. Aunt Mandy then comforted her son. That night, Aunt Mandy was staring at Mama and me. She complained about Ah Gong’s over protective act and partiality love towards me rather than her son. But no one dare to speak much.

The other day, I amazed with the skills of Ah Gong and Uncle Sam mending the fish nets. I saw Mama from far, went from town for the groceries. Yesterday midnight, I heard Mama planned to shop for family as we stayed at the home for almost 2 months without doing any work. That day, even it was a rainy day, Ah Gong planned to take me to the nearby coffee shop but without Kol. I brought along Bean and Ah Gong showed me a secret behind the bear, a button and I pressed it. It was a melody from Yiruma, Kiss the rain. It was a bit funny because whenever Ah Gong took me for a day trip, the day must turn to a snowy rain day. ‘Maybe one day, you do not need my courage anymore but remember, I always need yours’, he said.

That night, Ah Gong and Uncle Sam need to go to the sea for a heavy catch. Ah Gong’s warm, huge palms held mine and asked me to wait for him. But in the next morning, the surrounding atmosphere was weird and uneasy. Aunt Mandy seemed to avoid any further conversation with Mama. She even did not answer Mama’s questions at all and began to put Mama in awkward situation. I saw Mama dropping her tears when she was eating the meal cooked by Aunt Mandy. She felt that, she was not welcomed anymore in that house. That afternoon, Mama decided to move to a rented house and I wondered why.

I knew it was very hard for Mama because she needed to be my mom and dad at the same time and she worked very hard to earn for daily expenses. She tried to find extra part time jobs when sending me to the kindergarten. Ah Gong returned from the sea after a few days and I guessed he would be searching for me. ‘Knock, knock’, I opened the door and it was Ah Gong! I hugged him with the great effort ever. He had a long conversation with Mama and I saw he kept giving Mama some money. Since we moved to this rented house, Ah Gong came and visited us often.

Like usual, after breakfast, Ah Gong brought me to the riverside and that day, he brought along a kite. I was sitting alone while Ah Gong went to the nearby stall to buy some snacks. Suddenly, Kol came from nowhere and snatched away my kite. We fought for a while, it broke. I was extremely angry, I pushed Kol to the ground. Ah Gong arrived just in time and he blamed Kol for breaking the kite. Ah Gong didn’t scold me for pushing Kol. From far, Aunty Mandy saw all the incidents.

That night, I felt uneasy. I asked Mama to visit Ah Gong at the big, old house but she refused. I felt anxious and I held Bean tightly until I fell asleep. It was about 4a.m in the morning. Uncle Sam came and Mama woke me up with a pair of teary eyes by saying that, something had happened to Ah Gong. When we reached the old house, Ah Gong was not there to hug me anymore. I held his hand but I felt that my hands were warmer. I held his hand but he didn’t respond and gripped me tightly as usual. I could not see his bright smile and suddenly I missed his hand combing my hair. Ah Gong was surrounded by everyone and they were sobbing.

The other morning, we were prepared to wear black clothes and went up the hill. They carried a coffin and all of us had to put a flower in front of it. I wondered where was Ah Gong because I missed him as I didn’t saw him since yesterday 4a.m morning still, I didn’t dare to ask much. When we were having lunch, Mama said Ah Gong would not come to our house anymore. Mama said with the husky and unclear voice that Ah Gong had gone to a peaceful place and would watch me to grow up healthily. I felt sad because Ah Gong didn’t tell me anything, just left me without a farewell kiss.

I kept Bean as my precious treasure ever. I kept all the memories with Ah Gong as my greatest motion to overcome any obstacles. As I growing up, I begin to realize that he had gone to the place named heaven. Rainy days often reminded me of him, his smile, his care and his warm grip; Kiss the rain’s melody rewind the memorable time with him. For that time I knew, we cannot have a person to stay with us forever but, we can keep the memories that we spent with them, forever.

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